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		<title>Let Other People Critique Your College Admission Essay</title>
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Every year thousands of students face the challenge of submitting their applications to their dream schools and submitting their masterly crafted College Admission Essay. Before you can ever step on the pavements of the university, an aspiring student’s acceptance letter may be largely dependent on the student’s college admission essay. Admission essays and College Application [...]]]></description>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">Every year thousands of students face the challenge of submitting their applications to their dream schools and submitting their masterly crafted College Admission Essay. Before you can ever step on the pavements of the university, an aspiring student’s acceptance letter may be largely dependent on the student’s college admission essay. Admission essays and College Application Essays are very vital for one&#8217;s entry to a good reputable university. The admission essay can be the determining factor, of whether or not one is to be admitted to a certain college or university. Many students never make it to their desired schools not because of their grades or lack of extracurricular activities. They fail because of the admission essay they submitted. An admission essay does not really have to be Nobel Prize for Literature-like essay. It just has to be creative and one of a kind.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Year after year, admissions officers read thousands of College Admission Essays from all over the country (and the world). The probability that they will remember everything a student has written is one to a thousand. The only way that a student could make a mark and imprint his words to the admissions officers&#8217; minds is to be unique. This means to say that the essay should be creatively woven to bring out the real persona behind the student. Admissions officers don&#8217;t want to read essays that are written already in one&#8217;s resume like achievements and personal particulars. They are interested in what&#8217;s behind those achievements and grades. They are after the essence and soul of the particular student. Writing about one&#8217;s experiences is a good material to start one&#8217;s essay with. This will help bring out the spunk and creative genius in a person while baring his soul for the admissions officers to read.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">There are ways in which the student can check if the College Admission Essay he has written can catch another person&#8217;s attention and to see if the essay is grammatically correct. For one, he could let his family, friends and teachers to read the essay and have them critique it. In this way, the strong and weak points of the essay will be brought up and can be corrected. If more than three persons consulted say that the essay lacks color and life, or if the essay is not coherent and has no unity, then something must be very wrong with it. Don&#8217;t be offended by the criticisms received for they are only constructive ones and it will also help improve the essay. There&#8217;s a tendency that a person can&#8217;t see errors in one&#8217;s own writings. Therefore, it is important to let others read and critique one&#8217;s work. In fact, their comments and criticisms may be the very same comments and things that the admission officers will take note of as well.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Preparation for college requires a lot of patience and great deal of imagination. College Admission Essays as well as College Application Essays are the necessary essentials that could make or break a student&#8217;s future. Remember that one&#8217;s future is at stake with these essays. Needless to say, when one is writing every word in the paper, he should think about the future. Accordingly, there are three parts of college admission essays: the introduction, body, and conclusion. It&#8217;s always good to begin one&#8217;s essay with a bang to hook the readers to continue perusing the essay until the very last period. Make use of humor and wit, but never forget to be honest and true to one&#8217;s writing.</p>
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		<title>Your College Application Essay &#8211; Managing the Feedback</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Once you&#8217;ve completed your college application essay, it&#8217;s always a good idea to get feedback from other people. But who those people are, and how you manage their feedback, can often be the difference between a good essay and a great one. Here are six ways to manage that feedback, and use it to your [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="text-align: justify;">Once you&#8217;ve completed your college application essay, it&#8217;s always a good idea to get feedback from other people. But who those people are, and how you manage their feedback, can often be the difference between a good essay and a great one. Here are six ways to manage that feedback, and use it to your greatest advantage.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">1. Be sure you are reasonably happy with the essay before you show it to anyone. This doesn&#8217;t mean that you think it&#8217;s perfect and won&#8217;t be open to making changes. Instead, it assures that you will be able to analyze feedback from a position of strength, not insecurity, thus maximizing its benefits.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">2. Be very careful about whose opinions you seek, Many people consider themselves accomplished writers or editors and, although their intentions may be good, they simply aren&#8217;t. Even worse, they don&#8217;t fully understand what makes a successful college application essay. This won&#8217;t stop them from offering an opinion if asked so please, choose wisely. Remember, not all opinions are equal.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">If possible, ask for feedback from people familiar with the application process, teachers or tutors, professional writers, college students who are attending good schools, or someone whose perspective you highly respect. These readers will offer more perceptive, valuable, and ultimately more achievable input about your essay.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">3. Get three opinions per draft. One is too few, more than three will only be confusing.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Generally, if all three of your readers, or two out three, give you similar feedback, then there is obviously an issue in your essay that needs to be addressed. Make your revisions, further polish the essay, then look for three different readers to comment on the next draft. Continue in this manner until the feedback is almost unanimously positive. That&#8217;s when you&#8217;ll know that your essay is almost finished.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">4. Don&#8217;t be defensive. Listen carefully to everything your reader has to say, without rushing to defend why you used that turn of phrase or what you really meant in that paragraph. Stay objective about your work, as if you&#8217;re discussing someone else&#8217;s essay. This will allow you to truly hear what your reader is saying and to decide whether you agree with it, which is still your prerogative, or not.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">5. Ask questions. If you think a particular bit of feedback is accurate and valuable, ask the reader why he or she feels that way, what is it in the essay that provoked that opinion? Sometimes a reader will have a feeling about the essay (&#8221;something is missing, I&#8217;m not sure what&#8221;) that he can&#8217;t quite articulate. By asking genuine questions, you can often pinpoint what the issue is, and fix it.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">6. Trust yourself. Readers will sometimes suggest sweeping changes that are good, but not compatible with what you want to say. They might also be coming from a more adult, rather than a high school student, perspective. Remember that you worked hard to develop an essay topic that reflects your values and personality. While other ideas certainly exist, this is the one you&#8217;ve chosen &#8211; the one you believe in &#8211; and it&#8217;s okay to stick with it.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">People who give feedback on your college application essay are clearly doing you a favor, and it&#8217;s important to be appreciative. At the same time, however, keep in mind that your ultimate commitment is to writing the most effective application essay possible and to do that, you&#8217;ve got to use that feedback wisely</p>
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		<title>How to Improve Your College Admissions Essay</title>
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The college admissions essay can be quite a daunting and intimidating task for many aspiring college students. However, the college admissions essay does not have to be so bad. In all actuality though, it seems many colleges do favor an application essay which knocks them off their feet, but in that case, a book on [...]]]></description>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">The college admissions essay can be quite a daunting and intimidating task for many aspiring college students. However, the college admissions essay does not have to be so bad. In all actuality though, it seems many colleges do favor an application essay which knocks them off their feet, but in that case, a book on writing essays may help with that task along with a LOT of practice. On the other hand, many colleges and universities just want to know more about YOU&#8230;while seeing how well you write.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Colleges and universities WANT you to succeed. They want you to do well on the college admissions essay so they can accept you and make them look great! In order to help you along with this task, I have put together some tips to help all students along with their university admissions essays.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">First thing I wanted to point out is that focusing and staying on a topic that you know about very well is key. This will show, through your writing, that you are very sincere and do not appear to be misleading anyone. Write what you now about.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Put a little bit of humor in your writing. Of course, the college application essay is not a stand up comedy routing, but a little humor helps show a more modest side to your self. Remember to stay on topic while modestly making light humor out of some of the subject matter in your college admissions essay topic.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">In reference to the last tip, remember that you don&#8217;t need to impress the reader with something you don&#8217;t really have. Try to avoid using really big words that you normally would never ever use in real life. This will only come across as inflated and a little odd to them. But don&#8217;t worry, they read enough of this type of thins in many college admissions essays all the time from others. Be original.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Even though there may be an option to hand write your college application essay, try to type your essay out completely. If you cannot gain access to a computer or simply must write your essay out, then be sure to write as legibly as you can. A messy-looking essay may not show your writing in its best light and may even potentially hurt the reader&#8217;s impression of your writing skills overall. So it is just safer to type the essay when applying for college.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Start out with a rough draft of your essay and make improvements as you go along rather than simply writing from the heart and letting destiny do the rest. This will give you an opportunity to look over your grammar and be sure that it is clear, concise and legible (if writing by hand). You are trying to make the best impression possible for this admissions essay so make this shot count.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">After you have written the essay and have made corrections on it, have family and friends look at it with a critical eye. Ask friends or family members who have already written a college application essay to take a look at it to see if it does any justice based on their past essay experience.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">As I mentioned earlier, different colleges have different requirements for their admissions essays and it would be very wise to read over all of the guidelines the college or university sets forth in regards to your college admissions essay. It is very important to follow directions, especially when you want them to educate you. So be sure that the essay is no longer or shorter than what they require.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">These tips and referring to other essay-writing resources can help you, as a student, to really achieve your college goals and getting into that college you really wanted to attend. In many cases, seemingly smaller things such as the college essay for admissions makes such a big difference as it is the only real statement you are able to make in reference to the consideration of your admission to the college. So give it your best shot and show those essay readers the best side of you.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">S. Michael Windsor is currently publisher and a writer for BackToSchoolNetwork.com The BSN Online Back To School Guide is a premier college back-to-school information platform that provides individuals with a quality in-depth look at these topics as well as the associated products, services and information available today. Visit us today at http://www.BackToSchoolNetwork.com and get your free subscription our member services.</p>
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		<title>Your College Application Essay &#8211; Don&#8217;t Forget The Basics</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Driven by their desire to write a fantastic college application essay, students sometimes charge forward into the battle without their most powerful weapon, a clear approach to good writing. So, as a service to those who may have forgotten them, and as a reminder to everyone to take a deep breath and relax before you [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="text-align: justify;">Driven by their desire to write a fantastic college application essay, students sometimes charge forward into the battle without their most powerful weapon, a clear approach to good writing. So, as a service to those who may have forgotten them, and as a reminder to everyone to take a deep breath and relax before you begin writing, here are six basics steps that will help you write the most effective essay you can possibly write.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Step One: Brainstorming</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">For some students, this step has already been completed . They&#8217;ve locked into their essay subject, and they&#8217;re not going to change it. But for others &#8211; those less sure and those faced with a tricky essay prompt &#8211; some brainstorming might be required.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">As I&#8217;ve mentioned in other articles, the best time to brainstorm is right before you fall asleep and right after you get up. These are times when the brain is uncluttered, and fresh ideas have a better chance of coming to the surface. Long walks or drives on an open road can also work well to open the mind, as long as you make sure to watch where you&#8217;re going!</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Step Two: Freewriting</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Once you&#8217;ve settled on your topic, or even have a general sense of it, you can begin freewriting. This involves simply letting your mind roam through your topic while you write down everything that pops into your head. These can be single words or phrases, fragments of ideas or full blown concepts. Don&#8217;t worry about good sentences here and most importantly, don&#8217;t edit yourself. This is the time when you discover what your idea is really all about.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Step Three: Outlining</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Outlining is extremely valuable and critical to a well organized essay. Look at your free writing and begin to organize your ruminations into a cohesive outline. Not only will this help you arrange your ideas clearly, it will also stimulate additional ideas, related to your topic, that might not have come up in the freewriting.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Important Note: Students often want to skip this step and jump into their first draft. Instead, resist that urge to start writing, work hard on your outline, and watch how much time you will save in the long run.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Step Four: 1st draft</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Begin your essay, using the outline as a guide. Again, the first draft can be a time of discovery, as new ideas flow in. Stress content over mechanics here, as your essay begins to take shape.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Step Five: Revision</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Revising your essay is detailed work involving rereading, rewriting, reviewing, rethinking, rearranging, restructuring, tightening, deleting, moving, expanding, unifying, correcting and checking. Some questions to ask yourself in this process include: Is my basic premise working? What parts of the essay are good? What parts are boring? Does my essay flow naturally from one idea to the other, or am I repeating myself? Do my paragraphs consist of one basic idea, with sentences supporting it? Have I made any grammatical errors? Have I varied my vocabulary and sentence structure? Do I have an opening grabber and a satisfying conclusion?</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">This would also be the time to ask for help from those whose opinions about good writing you respect.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Step Six: Polishing</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Here&#8217;s where a good essay becomes great. Add similes, metaphors, interesting comparisons, humor. Comb your work for cliches and overused words or expressions and delete or replace. Hone your opening so that it draws the reader irrevocably into the rest of the essay. Look for ways to further tighten your essay by bringing back a concept you introduced at the beginning. This &#8220;bookend&#8221; technique, if used correctly, can close your essay with tremendous impact, and make it a stand out in the reader&#8217;s mind. Be scrupulous. Don&#8217;t back off. Keep working until every issue has been addressed.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Utilizing these six basic steps will surely decrease some of the anxiety surrounding the writing process, while at the same time improving the quality of your application essays</p>
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